Echoes of Silence (Caveman Chronicles)

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Silence stretched across the room like a held breath. The kind of silence that comes after something definitive has ended. It was not peaceful, exactly, but it was complete. Zara stood with her Da’s hand on her back and listened to their breathing echo off the marble. Her ribs hurt with each inhalation. Her fist throbbed in a hot, insistent rhythm where she’d driven it into Na’s torso. The absence of Qon was a constant background ache, a distinct space within her that nothing filled.

Kpleeb lowered his free hand to his vest, remembering now to disable his curse. “Clemency,” he said quietly. The word fell into the silence and sat there. Nothing dramatic happened. No visible change, no sound, no rush of energy.

“What is that for?” Zara murmurred. “How did the Ja die? I- I saw you kill Ka.” She paused and reviewed her memories. “Wait, how did we escape the bonds?” Zara pulled back and looked up at her Da’s face.

“A virus I built,” Kpleeb said quietly. His voice was rough, sanded down by whatever damage the Qon threads had done to his throat. “I tested on a few Xi, and all of them turned to riiat. The suspension targets silica-based cellular structures. Nothing else.” He coughed, winced, and spat a glob of dark phlegm onto the marble. “I made sure it only destroys the Xi.”

“Are you sure?”

“I even tested it on myself and a couple of the Hkkli. Not Kanta though.” His eyes shifted away from her. “I had to know…”

There was a sustained silence as Zara processed the information. She turned to more directly face her Da and spoke quietly. “What if you had died? Did you ever think how that would hurt me?” Her eyes began to well up with tears. “Your revenge, I understand… but it can’t be at the cost of yourself.”

Kpleeb awkwardly put his arms around her. “I’m sorry. I did think of you, but I- well I had to find a way to make the Predominant pay. I had to” He brushed a tear from her cheek. “Remember, I wanted to kill every Xi, and you talked me out of it.”

Zara rubbed her temple with her free hand. Her fingers came away smeared with blood. The emptiness in her chest pulsed in time with her heartbeat. “It worked on the Predominant. I didn’t think anything would.”

“Someone had to pay, and nothing’s invincible.” Kpleeb smiled gently and then seemed to relax. “I am sorry. Are we okay?”

She nodded, though the motion sent a spike of pain through her neck. She looked around the chamber. “I’m fine, Da, I just want you to think about life after this. You said that I am not defined by Qon, and in the same way, you do not end with the Predominant. I am thinking about this, and you should be too. Promise me you’ll think about it.

Kpleeb grunted noncommitally.

“Anyways, I know you can’t see the aji Da, but Qon escaped.”

“Maybe underground,” Kpleeb said. “Into the foundations. I can’t see it though. Are you sure it’s gone?”

“It fled when the Predominant were killed,” Zara said simply.

Kpleeb was silent for a moment, his gaze moving across the devastation. He eyed the empty armor, the riiat, the broken bodies of Ganix warriors who had died without landing a blow. His jaw worked, and Zara saw the calculation happening behind his eyes. “First we need to unearth the secrets that are here,” he said finally. “Then we decide what’s worth chasing after this.”

They moved together toward the broken dais. Zara’s legs were unsteady, each step sending fresh pain through her knees where she’d hit the marble, but Kpleeb kept pace beside her, one hand still on her arm. The floor was treacherous, slick with congealing fluids, littered with debris, coated in that fine gray dust that caught the light. They picked their way through it carefully, boots leaving prints in the riiat.

The dais where the three thrones sat appeared to be carved from a single block of veined marble, purple and gold threads running through white stone like circuitry. Up close, Zara could see that the sigils carved into its surface weren’t decorative, they were writing. Xi glyphs, thousands of them, arranged in concentric rings that spiraled outward from the center of each step. She couldn’t read them. The script was too dense and too different, the characters overlapping in ways that made her head hurt to look at.

“These aren’t just pretty patterns,” she said.

Kpleeb grunted. “Nothing in this place is just pretty.”

They completed their circuit of the dais and stopped at its far side, where the devastation was thinner. The floor here was cleaner, the dust settled in delicate veils rather than thick mounds. Zara tilted her head back.

The dome above them was even more impressive from directly beneath. What she had taken for painted artistry from a distance revealed itself as something far more intricate up close. The night sky wasn’t painted, it was carved. Thousands of interlocking slate panels fitted together with such precision that the seams were nearly invisible, each one etched with patterns that caught the light and held it. The day-to-night cycle that was projected overwhelmed the delicate lines, but as the night rose, the projected stars seemed to coalesce with the carved stars.

“That looks like slate,” Kpleeb murmured. “Oiitr said that Yefrtil was a slate mine, the most well known, maybe.”

The panels formed a map. Clusters of carved glyphs arranged in familiar patterns, though the constellations they depicted weren’t any she recognized. They radiated outward from a central point where a single star had been inlaid with some material that caught the light differently, brighter, with a faint blue tinge. Around that central star, concentric rings had been etched into each segment, the lines so fine they looked like hair.

As they watched, the light from hidden sources above the dome shifted. Not dramatically. It was just a subtle change in angle, as if the sun portrayed in that artificial sky had moved a degree westward. The shift sent ripples of shadow across the carved glyphs, animating them. Constellations that had been static a moment ago now seemed to pulse, the concentric rings breathing in and out with the play of light and dark.

“It’s a star chart,” Zara said. Her voice sounded small beneath the vastness of the dome. “But not any map I’ve seen in the Xi libraries.”

Kpleeb was silent beside her, his gaze moving across the carved sky with a focused intensity. Zara watched his eyes track from the central blue star to one cluster of glyphs, then to another, his brow furrowed in concentration.

“The central point,” he said finally. “That must be Nidix. Has to be. And the rings are distance markers, maybe. Or terminal coordinates.” He shook his head. “We need Kanta- and Viinox, if its still alive.”

Zara thought of Viinox running, the flash of its gray robe vanishing down the corridor as Tiirw fell. She hoped her friend had made it back to the ships. The thought pulled at her insides in a way that had nothing to do with the absence of Qon.

Zara tapped the necklace designed and given to her by her Mama.

“Kanta. We’re in the central chamber. We need you. Bring mapping equipment and—“ She hesitated, then added, “bring Viinox, if you can.”

The response came three seconds later, Kanta’s voice bubbling through the cracked speaker with its usual measured calm. “Acknowledged. On our way.”

The wait felt longer than it was. Zara stood with her Da beneath the carved dome and listened to the sound of their own breathing and the underlying silence. Kpleeb had found a length of broken spear shaft and was using it as a makeshift cane, his weight shifted off his injured knee. Neither of them spoke, they merely walked the chamber taking in the vast array of ancient sights.

Footsteps sounded in the corridor. Not the measured tread of Xi warriors or the light, quick steps of Ganix, but something in between. Zara turned.

Kanta filled the doorway first. Her short, stocky silhouette was unmistakable even through the distortion of her airowalking helmet, the water inside sloshing gently as she moved. Behind the curved glass, her large round eyes widened at the sight of the devastation, the dust, the empty thrones in the chamber. She carried a satchel slung across one shoulder, and a small device was clutched in her flippered hand.

Beside her, gray-robed and intact, stood Viinox.

Zara’s breath caught. She hadn’t realized how afraid she’d been for Viinox. The Xi’s neck slits fluttered in that rapid, agitated pattern she’d come to recognize as distress, and its blue eyes moved across the chamber in quick, assessing the carnage before settling on Zara’s face. “You’re alive!” she said..

Viinox tilted its chin upward slightly. “I ran. I am… relieved to see you safe and alive, Miss Zara.” Its gaze moved to the empty thrones, the riiat dust, and something complicated passed across its features. Something too subtle for Zara to parse, but she thought she saw relief there, and beneath it, a quieter emotion.

“Come look at this,” Kpleeb said, cutting through the moment with his usual pragmatism. He pointed upward with the broken spear shaft.

The four of them gathered beneath the center of the dome. Kanta’s eyes widened behind her helmet, water sloshing as she tilted her head back to take in the vastness of the carved sky. She reached into her satchel without looking and pulled out a stick of pale chalk.

“This is extraordinary,” she murmured and began to work.

Kanta’s method was methodical. She moved in a slow circle beneath the dome, chalk held between two flippered fingers, tracing lines between key clusters of glyphs on the marble floor. Carefully, she mapped the constellations above onto the ground below. The chalk left thin white trails that connected symbols Zara hadn’t even noticed were related. Kanta’s movements were quick and precise, her body rotating in small increments as she built the map from the center outward.

“These have to astral coordinates,” she said, bubbles rising in her helmet as she spoke. “But the reference frame is shifted.“ She tapped the blue inlaid star with her chalk. “The central point is Nidix, obviously. But the orientation is wrong for contemporary Xi navigation. This is so much older.”

Viinox stepped forward. From a handheld device, it projected a holo-map into the air. It appeared as a shimmering, translucent overlay of the known Xi empire, terminals glowing as bright points, orbs as softer hazes. The projection rotated slowly, aligning itself with Kanta’s chalk lines after a few moments.

“Spatial vectors,” Viinox murmured. Its three-fingered hands moved through the hologram, adjusting angles, scaling regions. “The terminal at Yefrtil corresponds to this cluster here. The First Terminal aligns with this arc. But there are deviations.” It paused, neck slits fluttering. “Significant ones. The map shows terminals that do not exist in our records and orbs that have no contemporary equivalent.”

Zara exchanged a glance with her Da. Kpleeb’s expression was guarded, but she saw the calculation happening. His mind was working through implications. “We should check the side chambers,” she said. “While they work.”

Kpleeb nodded. They left Kanta tracing her chalk lines and Viinox murmuring over vectors, and moved toward a corridor Zara had spotted along the eastern wall. It was narrow compared to the grand entrance hall, barely wide enough for two people to walk abreast, and it was unlit except for the same faint glow that permeated everything in this place.

The chambers beyond were small and surprisingly mundane. A dozen rooms were arranged in a horseshoe around a central common area. Each contained the same basic furnishings: a sleeping platform built into the wall, a small desk, a chair, shelves empty of everything except dust. The walls were hung with tapestries so old the colors had faded to muted blues and purples, the patterns indistinct with age.

“No personal effects,” Kpleeb observed, running a finger along one empty shelf. “Whoever it was, they cleared out long ago.”

“Or they were never here to begin with.” Zara lifted the edge of a tapestry. The fabric crumbled slightly between her fingers, ancient threads giving way. “These might be centuries old. Maybe the retinue left a long time ago.”

They completed the circuit and returned to the main hall. Kanta had finished her chalk map. It was a complex web of white lines covering a large section of the marble floor, constellations connected in patterns that made Zara’s head hurt to look at. Viinox’s hologram hovered above it, adjusted now to align perfectly with the chalk tracings.

Kanta looked up as they entered. Her flippered hand was extended toward the far wall of the chamber, where a sequence of reliefs had been carved into the stone. Most were cracked or partially collapsed, and the figures they depicted eroded beyond recognition, but a few sections remained intact.

“Look,” Kanta said. Her voice had that particular tone it took when she’d found something important. “These tell a story.”

The intact sections showed Xi figures, but not like any Xi Zara had seen. These were taller, their proportions wrong, limbs too long, shoulders too broad. They wore armor similar to the Predominant’s, but simpler, without the intricate etchings. And they were building something. A structure that emerged from the relief in overlapping layers, growing more complex panel by panel.

“Xih,” Viinox said quietly. “These must be Xih.”

“They’re building the terminals,” Zara realized. “Or something like them. Look at the patterns.”

But it was the final relief that caught her eye. Set apart from the narrative sequence, carved into a curved section of wall near the chamber’s northern exit, was a radial engraving. Concentric circles emanated from a central point, with lines connecting key locations in a pattern that mirrored the star chart above. One line in particular stood out: etched more deeply, running from the center toward a cluster of symbols that Zara recognized immediately.

Yefrtil.

All eyes settled on it. The engraving caught the pastel light from the dome and held it, the deep-cut lines throwing sharp shadows that pointed like arrows.

“That’s our next move,” Kpleeb stated confidently.

Zara nodded. Her body ached in a dozen places, her shoulder throbbed, and the emptiness inside her felt vast and cold. But the engraving on the wall was clear, and the path forward with it.

“Yefrtil,” she said. “We were just there! Whatever the Xih built, whatever the Predominant were hiding, we will find more clues there.”

Book review: Travel by Star

Authored by: Paul Scott Grill

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I tend to look at books as being on a scale of meat to candy. Candy is pure entertainment, easy to read, and I usually fly right through these stories. Meat might be difficult but has more substance, usually these are non-fiction. Ham is literally meat-candy, so it holds the center. While fiction is usually candy, Travel by Star has enough depth to push it toward the center. It is intelligent and thought-provoking while still being fun.

I picked up this indie fantasy book because I love to read independent author stories, the story seemed unique and interesting and I thought it might contain an underlying light in the darkness. I wasn’t let down. I don’t like spoilers, so this review will be intentionally vague.

First of all, this book is an epic fantasy through and through. The story covers a wide swath of well-built fictional world. It has a map, many characters, high-stakes outcomes, magic, and heroes. At over six-hundred pages, it reads like an epic and wraps up the main story pretty well.

It took a while for me to really get a sense of who the protagonist is, and I like that. Travel is a man that seems somewhat ordinary at first, though he comes from difficult times that have molded him into the hero that is needed. He reminds me of something my pastor says often: (paraphrasing) “God made you for this time. Be strong and courageous.” As I got to know this somewhat rough man, I encountered his depth and character. What makes Travel likable (to me at least) is his honor. He is a man of his word, someone reliable and strong. He is someone who will do the hard thing because it is the right thing. That’s the core of a hero.

The second protagonist is Nichole. At first she was interesting to me because she has issues. Not long into the book, I found that is special and designed for her unique task. It works, and her story unfolded over the course of time into a full purpose that I’m uncertain of in the end. I could not relate to her in any meaningful way.

With 600+ pages, there were a couple of times where I lost focus. The book contains a few side-stories, flashbacks, that support the world that is being built. Though added context can be useful, some of these might not be necessary, but they weren’t anything drastic, just a little side-track here and there.

What I loved about the story is the underlying theme: mankind’s fallen nature and need for redemption combined with available grace that is not scoffed at by the writer. There are layers of themes and meaning that are well applied and those who recognize them will appreciate them. The main theme always resonates with me, and is one of the main reason’s why I recommend this book. The story is clean, and I know that I could give it to a young teen to read. In this way it reminds me of Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings. Being full of action and adventure yet lifting the reader’s heart to perpetual hope.

The writing style is very descriptive without being too verbose. The prose is easy to read and follow, nothing awkward or weird. It’s not written down to youth, but is accessible to anyone who is commonly reads fantasy. For a debut novel, it’s quite good.

I also enjoyed the world-building. Travel by Star is a new world with depth, variety, and an enjoyable western feel. It’s gritty and dangerous, and as a result, the people in it are hardened and tired yet they persist. Very relatable.

I come away thinking about West and the Shrian kingdom which reminded me a bit of George R. R. Martin’s Song of Ice and Fire. I think the kingdom’s backstory would be pretty awesome.

Paul Grill says that he is writing a companion or a sequel, and I look forward to reading that when it comes out.

Dissolution (Caveman Chronicles)

The Index -|-

Kpleeb hung in the invisible Qon web and let the pain become a landscape. His right shoulder was in tremendous pain, and his left knee was definitely going to hurt for days. Blood from his nose had filled his mouth and dried there. Each breath drove the Qon threads deeper between his ribs, and each exhale was a wet, ragged thing that tasted like dying.

But his right hand was still working. His fingers found the seam in his armor vest, just below the collarbone, where he’d crafted a clasp himself months ago in his room aboard the Greki. The clasp was made from kerflk just like the vest. Inside it was a reservoir no bigger than his thumbnail, filled with a suspension so fine it was almost not there at all.

He had tested it on several Xi subjects and each had turned to riiat within minutes. The virus was elegant in its specificity: it targeted the silica-based cellular structure unique to Xi physiology, leaving everything else untouched. Humans, Ganix, Hkkli, and others. Only the Xi were destroyed.

He drew a breath. The threads cinched tighter, and something in his chest gave way with a hot, tearing sensation. He ignored it. His fingers found the clasp and pressed.

“Defile,” he breathed hoarsely.

The word left his lips as little more than a whisper, lost beneath the murmuring of the Predominant and the faint hum of the chamber. But the virus heard it. It moved in the air, invisible, odorless, a ghost of particulate so fine it caught the light only as a momentary haze, like heat rising from a tundra stone during the hotening.

No one noticed. The Predominant were still enjoying themselves.

“—pathetic,” Ka was saying, its voice carrying haughtiness. It had moved closer to Kpleeb, close enough that Kpleeb could see the individual etchings on its armor and notice how the light caught the swirls and made them seem to move. “All this way for vengeance, and you die without landing a single blow. I almost respect the commitment.”

“The child held Qon for so long. That’s a record. We should document the decay rate before…“

“Before I’m done with her,” Na finished, and its glow had warmed to something almost amber, eager and maternal. It circled behind Zara, one hand reaching toward her hair with terrible gentleness. “Such a waste of a child.”

Kpleeb waited. For several long seconds, nothing happened. The Predominant continued their performance, Ka pontificating and Na weirdly caressing the air near Zara’s terrified face. Kpleeb’s vision grayed at the edges again, and he forced himself to breathe through it. One breath. Another. The threads bit deeper.

Then Ka stopped mid-sentence.

Its brow furrowed. Not dramatically, just a slight crease between those piercing blue eyes, a momentary confusion, as if it had forgotten the next word in a well-rehearsed speech. Its hand, raised in some grand gesture, paused in the air.

Ja noticed as it noticed everything. Its bioluminescence flickered, a quick, irregular pulse, and its hand went to its throat.

“What—“ Na began, and then made a sound. Not a word. A small, puzzled noise, like a child who has touched something hot by accident. Its glow stuttered, the warm amber fading toward something pale.

Kpleeb steadied himself. The pain was still there, vast and consuming, but beneath it he felt something new: a shift in his bindings. They hadn’t completely loosened, not yet, but the tension had changed. The Predominant’s control was wavering.

Ka took a step backward. Its neck slits fluttered rapidly, then slowed, then fluttered again in an irregular rhythm. It looked down at its own hands as if they belonged to someone else, and something in its throat made a low, grinding sound.

Na had both hands pressed to its stomach, where the bioluminescence was pulsing in frantic, disordered patterns. Its eyes had gone wide, pupils dilated, and it was making a small yelp over and over that increased in volume.

For a moment, all three stopped talking, and the chamber fell quiet. They stood in their triangle and gazed unexpectedly inward, breath labored, faces confused.

Ka’s knees buckled first. It folded at the joints as if its bones had turned to water. Its neck slits fluttered in wild, panicked rhythms, opening and closing faster than any Xi’s should. One hand rose toward its own throat and hovered there, trembling, fingers curled inward.

Kpleeb watched the confusion become fear. Soon, fear become something worse. Ka’s eyes rolled, the whites showing as they rolled back, then forward, then back again in shuddering spasms. Its jaw worked silently, mouth open, and a thin gray fluid began to seep from the corner of its lips. The virus was in the crystalline structure of whatever passed for its organs. Kpleeb had seen this before, but never in a Xi as large or powerful as this one. The effect was similar and a bit slower.

Ja made a sound like a pipe cracking. Its bioluminescence stuttered and died out, then flared bright enough to throw stark shadows across the marble floor, then reduced again in rapid, disordered pulses. It dropped to one knee, hands braced against the stone, and its breathing came in jagged, whistling gasps through fluttering neck slits. “I don’t—“ it managed, and then the word dissolved into a long, rattling exhalation. Its fingers curled against the marble, nails scraping thin white lines in the polished surface, and it began to shriek loudly.

Na was the quietest. It simply folded, curling in on itself, arms wrapped around its stomach where the warm amber glow had gone sickly and pale. When it looked up at Kpleeb there was nothing there but animal bewilderment.

Slowly at first, then all at once, the invisible web unraveled around Kpleeb and Zara like a net coming undone. He dropped.

His knees hit the marble with a crack that shot pain up both thighs. He caught himself on his palms, fingers spread against the cold, stone floor and waited there for a moment, breathing. Each breath was a ragged, painful thing, and he could smell sweat and riiat in the air. His chest felt like it had been stepped on, ribs creaking with the expansion of his lungs. Dried blood from his nose adorned his upper lip, and his mouth tasted of salt and iron tang. The threads had left burning lines across his neck, wrists and forearms, but it had been unable to pierce through his armor. He could feel every one of them, a map of pain written across his skin.

Zara landed beside him with a thud and a gasp. He heard her choking, coughing, drawing air in desperate lungfuls. He didn’t look at her. Not yet. He had one thing left to do.

He planted his right hand flat on the marble and pushed. His shoulder ached deeply, and his knee screamed at him. He pushed through it, teeth clenched, and rose to his feet in one graceless, swaying motion. The room tilted around him, then settled. His right hand went to his back and found the sheath hidden beneath his armored vest.

The kerflk blade came free with a soft sound. Yellow stone, made by the Xih, shaped by Kpleeb’s own hands and voice over long nights aboard the Greki when sleep wouldn’t come.

Ka was on its knees now, head hanging, gray fluid dripping from its mouth to spatter on the marble below. Its armor glinted dully, the etched swirls of cloud and storm gone dark. Kpleeb stepped toward it, each footfall deliberate despite the pain that lanced through his knee. He adjusted his grip on the kerflk blade. The stone was warm against his palm.

He drove the blade into Ka’s ribcage from behind, angling upward beneath the armor plates. The wet crack of bone fracturing echoed through the chamber, and it was a sharp, definitive, sound that carried to the dome and back. Kpleeb felt the blade bite through whatever passed for cartilage in a Xi, felt the resistance give way, felt the warm rush of fluid around his knuckles. He grunted and shoved with his left palm against Ka’s shoulder blade, driving the blade deeper, twisting it slightly.

Ka made no sound. Its body went rigid, back arching, neck slits fluttering in one final, desperate rhythm.

Kpleeb watched the black lines reach into Ka’s eyes and turn the piercing blue to something dark and vacant. He pulled the blade free. Ka remained upright for one impossible moment, balanced on its knees, head tilted back as if still issuing some silent command to the empty air. Then it crumbled.

The dissolution was swift and complete. Its body collapsed inward, armor and all, compacting into a swirling plume of gray-white dust that billowed outward across the marble floor. The dust caught the light from the dome, each particle glowing briefly before settling. It drifted in slow, lazy currents, settling over the cold stone in a thin, fine layer. The armor pieces clattered and rang as they hit the marble, empty shells with nothing inside them.

The echo of the bone crack faded into silence. Kpleeb stood amid the drifting plume breathing the dry, chalky scent of riiat, kerflk blade dripping Ka’s internal fluid. Ka was gone. Reduced to dust and memory as it should be. He turned toward Ja, but saw only a pile of riiat.

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Qon’s golden tendrils were leaving.

Zara watched them from the floor where she’d landed, her palms pressed flat against cold marble, breath coming in short, painful gasps. Threads of Qon unwound from the air around her, pulling back from the walls, from the dome, from the shattered remains of the Ganix warriors who lay scattered across the chamber. They retracted like the tentacles of some vast, wounded creature, coiling inward toward the center of the room where the three thrones stood. For a heartbeat they gathered there, a knot of brilliant gold light pulsing with what looked almost like panic, and then they fled into a wall behind the thrones.

The light seemingly dimmed as Qon went, at least to Zara. Golden brilliance fading to amber, then to a dull yellow glow, and then nothing. Her muscles ached from hanging in those threads, her ribs throbbed where they’d been compressed, and her right shoulder felt like it had been dislocated and roughly shoved back into place. She pushed herself to her feet, swaying, and the world tilted sickeningly before righting itself.

She saw her Da pull a long, kerflk knife out of Ka’s back, and turned to look for the others.

Na was on the ground ten paces away, curled on its side, twitching violently. Its bioluminescence had faded to a sickly, pulsing glow that made its gray-green skin look jaundiced. One hand clutched at its stomach where Zara had punched it earlier; the other twitched weakly.

Zara remembered Na’s hand reaching for her hair. Remembered the soft, maternal tone as it said “Let me have the girl. Just for a little while. I want to feel her break.” The memory landed in her chest like a hot stone.

She launched herself forward with no plan. No Qon to guide her. Just her body, hurt and furious, driving forward off her back foot with all the strength she had left. She swung her leg back and put her whole weight behind the kick. It impacted Na’s head like a wrecking ball. The edge of the bottom dais step and Na’s head connected with a sickening thud. Something in its neck gave, and Na stopped moving. In a few moments, the body began dissolve, a finger first and thn slow, the rest followed until riiat was all that was left.

Zara sighed heavily and turned to look for Ja. As she moved, she staggered backward and stumbled, arms pinwheeling for balance that wouldn’t come.

Kpleeb’s hand closed around her upper arm. His grip was firm, steadying, his fingers warm through the fabric of her sleeve. He pulled her upright and she leaned into him, breathing hard, and for a long moment neither of them spoke.

The chamber fell silent.

Their ragged breathing was the loudest thing. Zara’s came in short, pained gasps; Kpleeb’s was deeper, slower, each exhale carrying the wet edge of damage to his lungs. Flickers of light played across the devastation. The dome above cast shifting pastel hues over scattered debris—broken weapons, fragments of Ganix armor, the empty shells of Xi plate mail lying where their wearers had dissolved. Spent riiat dust covered the marble in thin, ghostly veils, catching the light in brief flashes before settling. Near the center of the room, the three thrones stood empty on their raised dais, gold and purple cushions undisturbed, as if their occupants had simply stepped away for a moment.

The Predominant were gone. Reduced to dust and memory.

Zara remembered the poem Viinox had quoted. “They rule with wisdom, age, and fear. Their power increasing every year.”

Kpleeb wheezed out something that might have been a laugh. “Not anymore.”

Predominant (Caveman Chronicles)

The Index -|-

The huge door to the Predominant’s chamber was perfectly silent as it rotated, and colored light glinted on its intricately patterned surface. Zara stepped into the chamber behind her Da, and the weight of three, solemn gazes settled on her skin like physical pressure.

The Predominant sat on a raised, marble platform that was lined in gold and purple, and she saw them clearly for the first time, not as legends, but as living creatures. One was dressed in armor that resembled that which she had seen in the murals on Yefrtil, and they looked almost identical. Same gray skin, same elongated features, same piercing blue eyes that caught the light like polished stone. Their heights definitely gave them away. The one on the left wore the armor and stood a full head taller than the others, shoulders squared, spine straight. It commanded the space without even trying. The one in the center was taller than Zara and wore an unadorned gray-blue robe. Its limbs were lithe and purposeful, nothing wasted in their posture. The one on the right was slightly shorter and carried a softness that was almost intangible. It’s robe was soft and flowing.

The chamber was round and bathed in a pastel hue. A sky was portrayed in stunning detail on the domed ceiling, and there Zara could see the sun beginning to set. The triad of thrones, for demonstrating the hubris of emperors, were the furniture of pure arrogance,. They were set on varicolored foundations inlaid with a multitude of precious stones. Pure white cushions with gold embroidered trim and tassels adorned them, and in front, ornate wooden footstools invisibly hovered at just the right height.

Everyone stared at the others for a long moment until finally, the tall one moved first. A single gesture, finger flicking toward Tiirw, and Zara’s Xi shipmate collapsed mid-step as if a switch had been flipped. No words. No hesitation. The authority of the motion made Zara’s breath catch.

Viinox saw it and ran.

[Smart,] Zara thought, watching Viinox vanish down the corridor from whence they had come. Tiirw’s body quickly turned into a pile of riiat.

The Ganix warriors were smart too, and they were adept at group tactics. All twelve of them silently spread out, lightning spears peppering the Predominant with crackling bolts of electricity. The bolts died against the Predominant’s shields without so much as a flicker of strain. The warriors, to their credit did not hesitate, and they died before they had finished two strides toward the center. The Predominant hadn’t even risen from their seats.

“We welcome you home, child.” Three voices spoke, perfectly synchronized. The tall one’s mouth moved a fraction before the others, setting the pace. The center one’s hands stayed folded, practical and still. The third smiled widest, teeth sharp and white, something almost maternal in the expression that made Zara’s stomach turn.

She caressed her Qon shield instinctively. Invisible golden Qon flared around her and her Da. Threads of aji wrapped everything in this place. She’d never seen so much, never felt the air itself thrumming with invisible power. The Predominant’s shields dwarfed hers, thick bands of golden energy that moved when they moved, breathing with them. It was awe-inspiring and terrifying at the same time.

Watching the aji play over the Predominant sent a cold shiver through her psyche. For the first time, she realized that she was outmatched. “Da,” she whispered. “They’re so strong!” Kpleeb stepped forward anyway, placing himself between her and the Predominant. She wanted to pull him back. She wanted to tell him that the tall one decided who lived and the soft one looked at her like she was property. But the words stuck in her throat.

“Is this the great Predominant then?” Kpleeb said, voice steady despite the clear danger. He looped his thumbs under his multi-layered, kerflk vest and pushed his chest out. “Which one of you is the Ka, the leader who will speak for your galactic band of kidnappers and murderers? Huh?! You have taken me from my home. You killed my wife and kidnapped my daughter. My name is Kpleeb of the canyon river tribe. I’ve come here for vengeance!”

The center one leaned backward nonchalantly, displaying a serious lack of concern. “We did none of these things. We only exist here on Nidix, and we will never leave.” Its hands gestured towards its mates. “We serve the Xi and support them with our strength and commitment. We do not capture or kill unless attacked.” It tilted its head in question. “Are you attacking us, Builder?”

The soft one turned to the others, hand still resting on their stomach. Its bioluminescence shifted, spiraling faster, patterns of anxiety or excitement playing across their skin. “Is this really the Builder? It seems so small and weak.”

Kpleeb scoffed and waved a dismissal with his hand. “You pathetic three, the Ja, Na, and the Ka, the embodiment of your murderous diety, Janaka. It all seems a bit redundant, no?!”

The tall one laughed expansively, and the sound carried authority even in mockery. “You must have studied us and if you did, you know that we are impervious, especially to you. Maybe you should stick to your rocks and caves. Oh Builder, build something for us now, please. Maybe a toy house! Yes, do it now!”

The center one, Ja, raised a finger to point at Kpleeb, and the others fell silent. “You will not discover vengeance here, Builder. Only your demise.” A sharp whistle came from its mouth. Zara felt it in her teeth, in her bones, in the golden energy that had lived with her since before she had known its name.

Qon quivered and fled. Zara screamed. The golden light seemingly tearing itself from her soul, flowing toward the triad like water rushing to find the sea. For one heartbeat, she was able to resist, but Qon was strong. It twisted, fighting to leave, a caught animal desperate to escape its lifelong bond. In a moment it was subsumed into the golden shield surrounding the Predominant.

Zara’s muscles hitched and she fell. The spongy floor absorbed her impact, and she lay there gasping, empty, hollowed out. A lifetime of Qon’s constant presence, gone. The silence in her skull was deafening. “Da,” she choked out. “It’s gone. They took Qon away from me.”

Her Da didn’t hesitate. She heard the lightning spear activate, the whine of her own creation powering up, the cracking thunder of discharged energy. She saw the golden shield absorb it without effort or interest as it did with those of the Ganix that were now scattered on the floor. “Get up,” Kpleeb said. “Get up and fight!”

Zara tried. She pushed herself to her knees, but her body felt wrong. Heavy and slow. She’d never thrown a punch without Qon guiding her fist, never dodged dipped, ducked, dived, or dodged without the beautiful energy whispering where the blow would land. She was blind. She was helpless. “I can’t,” she breathed.

“You are more than Qon.” Her father’s voice, steady despite the fact that Ka, the tall one, was rising to meet him. “You are strong. You are smart. You know how to fight. Your reflexes are amazing even without the power. You are my amazing daughter, and you are not helpless!” He leveled his spear and swung with all his strength.

Ka moved to intercept with a physical blow.

“Fight!” Kpleeb shouted, dodging a second crushing blow.

Zara pushed herself up. She watched the soft one, the Na. She remembered it as the one who carried life, it circled toward her father’s blind side. The center one stayed still, unconcerned and unassuming, its calculating gaze tracking every motion. The tall one pressed the attack, commanding the space, forcing Kpleeb back as he desperately dodged the attacks.

Zara moved. No Qon to guide her, just muscle memory and desperation. She rolled under a sweep of Na’s arm, came up inside the perimeter, drove her fist into the soft belly. Something cracked. The Na shrieked, stumbling back, hands clutching their stomach. But there were three of them. The center one gestured, efficient and precise, and Qon threads wrapped Zara’s limbs. The tall one struck her Da with the back of its hand and sent him sprawling. The Na recovered, bioluminescence shifting toward the red, wounds already healing.

Zara struggled against the threads. She could feel them now, golden lines burning where they touched. Though the power that had always been with her was gone, she could finally see what it had hidden.

“You will submit, Ixant.” The center one’s voice addressed her, practical and cold. “Submit or we will destroy your father. You are a great success, one of our own creation, and you will fulfill your destiny.”

The tall one raised their hand, and the threads tightened. Zara felt herself lifted, her father beside her, both of them hanging in golden chains.

The ceiling wheeled overhead, moon shifting, stars pointing toward mountains she would never see. The threads bit deeper. Her Da’s scream tore through the chamber, raw and broken. Zara hung beside him, fingers twitching, unable to reach, unable to help, the absence of Qon a hollow void inside her skull.

“Da,” she whispered, voice cracking. “I can’t… hold on.” The triad’s bioluminescence flared in unison: utilitarian, commanding, nurturing, three aspects of a greater whole, something she didn’t understand. The threads drew tighter, and the night sky spun on, indifferent to their struggle.”

Her Da hung beside her, and the sound he made was the worst thing she had ever heard. Not a cry of pain now, he’d endured plenty of that, but a grunting, animal sound that came from somewhere beneath his ribs. His fists were clenched so tight the knuckles had gone white, tendons standing out along his forearms like cords. Qon threads had wrapped his wrists and were slowly working their way up, tightening with each labored breath.

“Stop,” she whispered, but the word had no air behind it.

The throne room spread beneath them, a perfect circle of polished marble veined with threads of gold and purple. The floor caught the pastel light and threw it back in soft, rippling patterns. Vaulted arches soared overhead, and beneath everything, a hum, not mechanical, but something older. The enchantments, Viinox had called them once. The ancient aji woven into the foundation of this place, quietly humming like a hive of sleeping bees.

The Predominant formed a triangle around them. Ka, the tallest, stood closest to Kpleeb, armor glinting with that strange bronze sheen she’d seen in the murals. Intricate etchings swirled across the breastplate, clouds and storms captured in metal. Its blue eyes were flat and amused.

“The great Builder,” Ka said, and its voice bold and confident. “Look at him struggle like an insect caught in honey. What a pointless specimen.”

Ja spoke. “The child is far more interesting. She held Qon longer than any Ixant before her. ”

“A wonder she exists at all,” said Na, the soft one. Its glow had shifted to a warmer hue, almost affectionate, which made the words hit harder. It circled toward Zara’s blind side, movements fluid and predatory. “We gave you life, little one. We gave you purpose. And this is how you repay us? With betrayal?”

“My purpose,” Zara said through gritted teeth, “was never yours to give.”

Na’s smile widened, teeth sharp and white. Its eyes were still cold. “Everything is ours to give, or to take.”

Kpleeb thrashed against the threads. Zara heard the creak of his bones, the pop of a joint straining. He was trying to reach her, his fingers splayed, stretching toward her hanging form. The golden web gave a little with each of his movements, then snapped back tighter, burning fresh lines into his skin.

“Your woman died well,” Ka said conversationally. “She fought. I admire that in a primitive. Most of them just scream.”

Kpleeb’s roar filled the chamber. He lunged against the threads, and for a moment Zara thought he might break free, but then the web cinched. Blood welled along the lines where they’d bitten into his flesh.

Zara dug her boots into the Qon web. The threads were slick, almost fluid, but she managed to hook her heel into a knot of energy and push. It gave a fraction of an inch, not enough to free her, but enough to shift her weight, to take some of the pressure off her wrenched shoulders. The threads tightened with her next struggling breath. She felt them working between her ribs, compressing her lungs, and for a terrifying moment she couldn’t draw air at all. The world grayed at the edges.

“Your daughter is strong,” Ja observed. Its voice was measured and analytical. “Stronger than the others. We should keep her. Study her. The next iteration could be—“

“No,” said Ka. “They die together. Poetic, don’t you think? Father and traitor child, united in failure.”

Na’s bioluminescence pulsed faster, spiraling toward something that looked like excitement. “Wait. I should have the girl even if just for a little while. A dissection would be educational.”

The three flared in unison, and the Qon threads responded, humming in resonance, and Zara felt them dig deeper. Her Da had gone quiet, his head hanging, blood dripping from his nose to spatter on the marble below. Each drop made a sound like distant water; drip, drip, drip.

Above, on the dome she saw purple mist and cobalt stars as the sun rose. [Just like the poem.] The dome was a masterpiece of artistry, a beautiful lie suspended over a chamber where gods murdered children.

The threads drew tighter. Zara’s vision narrowed to a tunnel. She could see her Da’s face, slack with pain, and near him the three Predominant watching with the casual interest of scholars observing a caged animal. Ka’s hand was raised, fingers splayed, controlling the web. Ja’s gaze was calculating, already moving past this moment to whatever came next. Na’s smile had softened into something almost tender.

Zara hung in the golden web and waited for the end.